Writing
is very useful. Almost everything we use writing. Especially in social media.
Such as bbm, fb, twitter, and etc. Exactly, we are not only can find writing in
social media, but also in non social media. Such as, magazines, novels and etc.
If
we want to improve our knowledge, remember what we have done, easy to get a
job, and easy socialization with society, so we have to write.
Writing
can improve our knowledge. So, it can also increase our information. We get knowledge
through reading, doing something, looking event that ever happened and other.
So to improve our knowledge, we have to write about what we have got to social
media or non social media. Then ask our friends to give suggestion and
correction about our writing to make it be better. In contrast, if we have good
knowledge by our perception, but we were not want to share it by writing,
moreover published it in social media or non social media. So, we do not know
about our knowledge quality, exactly. We will think, our knowledge is better
then others. Actually, we can not
improve our knowledge because nobody
know about our knowledge. So how can them give additional information or correct
our writing while they do not know about it. So writing can make our knowledge
be better.
Writing
make us remember what we have done. Sometimes, we forget about sweet memorize
that very important in our life. It caused by we did not write the meaning full
of memorize. If we write event that happened in our daily to a diary or memo,
so we will not forget about it. We always remember it. For example, we have
ever been the best in competition that very famous. Such as, we got the first
champion in Indonesian English competition. Then, we got a goblet, a
certificate, and scholarship for our college. Amazing! How lucky we are. Then
this moment we write in our diary. So, if we have been old at sixty five years
old, we open our diary again, so we will remember about the best moment that
have ever happened in our life.
Writing
make us easy to get a job. Everybody needs a job in their life that use to
complete everything in their daily. Getting a job, we have to complete all of
requirement that needed in a job. One of
them is application letter. We have to write it as the important necessary to
get a job. Writing is not only to get a
job, but it is also use in daily job. Such as make the proposal that use to
meet at clients, ask donation and others. For example, we have a good writing
skill. So, it is easy for us to write proposal that we useful to lend donation which useful in
our business company. Exactly writing is not only useful to a proposal. But
also use to make report our daily job. If our report is good and clear, so it
is easy for us to get the best degree.
Writing
is easy for us to socialization with society. not all of people can do
socialization with society well. Just
little of them can do it. They are people that have been successfully in their
life. Getting success in this life is
not easy, but need hard working. One of their hard working is writing. Before
we graduation in a college successfully, we have to write skripsi as important
requirement. After graduate, we want to get a job. Getting it, we have to write
application letter. In our daily working we have to write report clearly and
well in orders to get the best degree. If we are this position, it is easy for
us to socialization with society. For example , we are a regent in a regency.
It is not difficult for us to give suggestion or instruction to society where we
are working. It is caused by writing.
So, writing is very import in our life and society.
after the peer reader, you get a good progress lina. go ahead! :D
BalasHapusThat's a good essay leni. well done.
BalasHapusI don't think u need to write the second paragraph as a paragraph because it only consists of 1 sentence. Just put it at the first paragraph!
BalasHapusgood job leni
BalasHapusgood essay..
BalasHapusYou always start your essay in the same word like "writing"
BalasHapusbut I think u could make variation
i agree with TYA...
BalasHapusleni,,u can change or choose another word to say what u mean...not only writing first right???
nice job leni..:)
go ahead leni
BalasHapusgood job leni.
BalasHapuswelldone leny.
BalasHapusit would be better to add some idioms or phrasal verbs. it will make ur writing more nature as native's
BalasHapus