Writing
is a process to make something that we remember in our mind on the papers use
hand or typewriter. It is not only on the papers, but it can also be in fb, bbm,
twitter, and others social media. In
writing, I can express something that I remember in my mind that cannot I
say directly. In addition, I can
remember what I had written in my diary.
Talking
about my experience during studying writing in the last semester, I studied
with Mr. Sounir and Miss. Fitrawati. These lecturers have different ways in
writing teaching.
Mr. Sounir’s ways has writing the unique ways
in teaching. He always asked his students to follow and concentrate about the
material which he was explaining. If we did not do it just for a few minute, he
got angry at us. He would say, “what are you doing beauty ladies”? While
underestimated us. Then, he said again, “you were missing something
important”. Sometime, he just told about
another things, not about material. If we did not follow his told about, he
would get angry at us also. If he laughs, we should laughs too. If he said yes,
we had to say yes. If not, he would underestimate us. He would say, “you do not
understand about what I have said, so, you do not say yes or do you know that
how funny the story that I have told, so you do not laugh”. In contrast, the
unique ways that he did in his class very important. Such as, follow up and
concentration about the material. It will make us understand about the
material.
Then
talking about Mrs. Fitrawati ways. She has the special ways in teaching. She
did not ask her students seriously about material. We did not must to follow up
what she said. She did not do what Mr. Sounir did. She said that if were
studying with her, we could relax and enjoy but sure and understand. She taught
us like her friends. Not as a lecturer and her students. So, we were not worry
to ask her about what we did not understand. It caused by she as our friends in
her teaching.
There
was something that still fresh in my mind. When I presented my descriptive
paragraph in front of class. That time we were studying with Mr. Sounir. I felt nervous because I was not only explain
to my friends but I have to answer every question about what I have presented.
One by one question has been answered. It also caused by Mr. Sounir and others
friends help me. The last question by Rangga. He ask “why do your paragraph too
short? You should add additional information to make your paragraph longer and more complete”.
Then, I said thank you for suggestion, but wrote these paragraph as long as I
knew. For the next, I will do it.
Next
when studied with Mrs. Fitra. She asked me to read a paragraph that she
presented in front of class because the paragraph so clearly from my chair. I
was very ashamed when she said that I
read like junior high school students.
On the other hand, I
would like to say thank you very much for my writing lecturers that given
correction to improve my writing be better. So, before do writing I have to
read more and find another information that useful to make my writing be
better. Read more not only improve my vocabulary but also make me common at the
grammar and spells in writing.
good essay
BalasHapusGreat essay leni
BalasHapusthank you..
HapusGreat job
BalasHapusI have read it for many times and you have made it better...
Do not forget to pay attention on your grammar.
ok, thank you
Hapusyou had a better idea than before len, keep going
BalasHapusthanks a lot
Hapusplease change the title as "paragraph writing", leni, :)
BalasHapusthanks for your suggestion..
Hapus